本書是雅思考官丹·伯恩斯十余年評分經(jīng)驗的精華。作為考官，他非常了解中國考生的應(yīng)試特點，尤其是考生得分偏低的Task 2寫作專項。為了幫助考生解決寫作中常見的中式英語問題、教授考生用思辨的方式拓展寫作思路，作者在本書中收集了近十年來在雅思A類和G類寫作考試Task 2 中出現(xiàn)過的各類題材的議論文寫作題，并且為每道題目提供了符合考官評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的高質(zhì)量范文，對考生的寫作具有很強(qiáng)的指導(dǎo)意義。

《劍橋雅思寫作9分范文》是雅思考官Dan Berns十余年評分經(jīng)驗的經(jīng)驗的精華。Dan Berns 自幼在劍橋長大，劍橋大學(xué)英語語言文學(xué)學(xué)士。作為考官，他非常了解中國考生的應(yīng)試特點，他通過本書分享自己的經(jīng)驗，告訴考生什么樣的文章是考官想要看到的。書中的113篇高質(zhì)量范文全部由考官Dan Berns 親自撰寫，包含雅思考試�？嫉沫h(huán)境、教育、犯罪、健康、食品都主題。英式思維寫作、觀點新穎，摒棄模板寫作。他通過自己地道純正的語言告訴考生雅思寫作考查的重點不只是在語言層面，更重要的是考查文章的觀點和邏輯。

A Letter to Readers




Dear readers,



I want to welcome you to the third book in IELTS EXAMINER SERIES of 9 POINTS. A lot has changed in IELTS since the first book was released seven years ago, and this book will help you deal with some of those changes. The first major point is that over the next few years, the IELTS writing exam is not going to be marked in China anymore, but largely marked in other countries, where it can be done more cheaply.



This will have two effects on the writing exam, one small and one big. The small effect is that your papers will not be sent to Shanghai, Beijing, Guangzhou, or any of the marking centres in China anymore. Your papers will be scanned and sent to examiners in places like India, where your exam will be checked and examined. This leads to the bigger effect. As the papers are no longer going to be marked in China, which means that you students, have to start breaking out of your comfort zones and writing about what is going on around the world, rather than just writing about what is happening in your town, city, or country.



This book doesn�餿 only contain essays, vocabulary and expressions which will help you to push beyond 6.5, but also contains ideas, news, and logic from the real world, which will easily push you beyond 7.5. The most important thing to remember about the IELTS test, is…


IT IS NOT AN ENGLISH TEST IT�餝 A GENERAL KNOWLEDGE TEST



It doesn�餿 matter if you can read and write perfect English, if you know nothing about the question. How many times have you looked at a question about the environment, education, crime, health, food etc. and your mind was completely blank? This book will give you all the language, ideas, and confidence you need to crush Task 2!



So what are you waiting for? Jump into the book! In closing, I wish you all the luck in the world!



Dan Berns

2023.05.01





給讀者的一封信




親愛的讀者,


歡迎大家來到雅思考官9分系列的第三本書。自7年前第一本書出版以來，雅思考試發(fā)生了很大變化，這本書將幫助你應(yīng)對其中的一些變化。第一個要點是，在未來幾年，雅思寫作考試將不再在中國評分，而主要是在其他國家評分，在那里評分費用更低。


這對寫作考試有兩個影響，一個小影響，一個大影響。小影響是，你的試卷將不再被送到上海、北京、廣州或中國的任何一個閱卷中心。你的試卷將被掃描并發(fā)送給印度等地的考官，在那里你的考試成績將被核對和檢查。這導(dǎo)致了更大的影響， 由于試卷不再在中國評分，這意味著學(xué)生們必須開始跳出你們的舒適區(qū)，寫世界各地正在發(fā)生的事情，而不僅僅是寫你們的小鎮(zhèn)、城市或國家正在發(fā)生的事情。


這本書不僅包含文章、詞匯和表達(dá)(這些可以幫助你取得6.5分以上的成績)，還包含來自現(xiàn)實世界的想法、新聞和邏輯（這些可以讓你輕松地取得7.5分以上的成績）。關(guān)于雅思考試要記住的最重要的事情是
這不是英語測試，而是常識測試。


如果你對這個問題一無所知，那么你的英文讀寫能力是否完美并不重要。有多少次當(dāng)你看到關(guān)于環(huán)境、教育、犯罪、健康、食品等的問題時，你的大腦一片空白?這本書將為你提供完成任務(wù)2所需的所有語言、想法和信心!


那么，你還在等什么呢？趕緊投入到這本書的學(xué)習(xí)中來吧！最后，我祝你好運無邊!



丹·伯恩斯

2023.05.01

A Quick Note about Topics




When I was writing this book, I used real Task 2 questions that had been used over the past five years. As you can imagine, the list of questions was huge, and it took me a long time to sort through them. However, after a while I noticed that there were patterns in the questions used. The most important pattern I noticed was that some topics appeared more than others.



The topic that shows up most in Task 2 is educationaround 25% of the exams from the last five years were about this topic. Other topics that showed up a lot were health, crime, living in cities, parenting and charities, which all showed up around 10% of the time. With these figures in mind, you should probably remember there is a higher chance of getting an education�瞨elated question.



With those topics in mind, all the questions in the book have one or two keywords at the top, to help you stay on track. For example:



Space travel has been possible for some tim

Dan Berns英國人，自幼在劍橋長大，劍橋大學(xué)英語語言文學(xué)學(xué)士，后在清華大學(xué)獲得碩士學(xué)位�，F(xiàn)任上海天華英澳美學(xué)校教師，擔(dān)任雅思考官十余年。Dan Berns 非常了解中國考生的應(yīng)試弱點，通過本書分享自己多年的經(jīng)驗，告訴考生什么樣的文章是考官想要看到的，而不僅僅是背誦寫作模板。

目 錄CONTENTS
A Letter to Readers
給讀者的一封信
A Quick Note about Topics
本書使用說明
序號范文題目頁碼
001
Nowadays, many charities publicize what they do by giving a name to a particular day, such as Children�餾 Day for encouraging the good treatment of children or National Non�睸moking Day for encouraging people to give up smoking. Why do these charities and organizations do this? How effective can these special days be?

002
Some people believe that imported food has a positive effect on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

003
Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this has a negative effect on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

004
Nowadays many old people live in retirement communities with other old people. Is this a positive or negative development?

005
In the modern age many people think that it is unnecessary to teach children the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

006
In some countries, small town�瞔entre shops are out of business because people are driving to large out�瞣f�瞭own stores. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

007
Young people are often influenced in their behaviour and situations by others of the same age. This is called peer pressure. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

008
Space travel has been possible for some time and some people think space tourism could be developed in the future. To what extent do you think it�餾 a positive or negative development?

009
Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

010
In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

011
After some criminals are released from prison, they still continue to commit crimes. Why do you think this is? What can be done to prevent it?

012
Some people believe that a country can benefit a lot from universities education, while others believe that sending a large percentage of young students to universities leads to unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

013
To learn effectively, children need to eat a healthy meal at school. How true is this statement? Whose responsibility is it to provide food for school children?

014
Some people think that the government should pay for public libraries in every town, while some people think it is a waste of money because we can access information from the Internet. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

015
As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what are the reasons and effects on society?

016
It is increasingly popular to find out the history of your family. What do you think are the reasons and is it a positive or negative development?

017
Memorisation of information by frequent repetition, namely rote learning, plays a role in many education systems. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

018
Ambition is an important character for people who want to be successful in life. Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

019
News reports in the media tend to focus on problems and emergencies. This might be harmful to individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

020
Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

021
In many countries, 24�瞙our news channels transmit throughout day and night. Some people think this is a positive development, but others do not think so. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

022
In the world, only a few languages are increasing in use, while many others are declining. Do you think this is a